Will you read my very short horror story? (IMPROVED VERSION)?

It's much improved on the first version and I don't know whether I would have guessed the ending had I not already read it. Print it off and read it out loud or get someone to read it to you and that way you will hear what needs changing. The only advice I have is try to use less words in your description. "I decide I no longer need disclose myself from the law" does not sound right, try ; 'I decide I no longer need to hide from the law.' Good luck and keep writing.